English

Below is some information that could help your child to improve their standard of English. If you would like to learn the expectations of children at each age, please click on the button at the top titled: Things your child should learn and find the English section. 

I believe that to be able to talk about a topic effectively, one must be very familiar with it. Ideally one must have a great deal of recent experience of it.

If one cannot talk about the topic, then when the words are read, they will have less impact and meaning than they otherwise would.

If one has not read about the topic, it is much less likely that written work produced about the topic will show the true potential of the writer. 

In summary, begin by giving each child an opportunity to experience the topic, then talk about it in detail. If possible, the child should be given ample opportunities fro them to play with and enjoy it. Maximise opportunities to talk about the topic. Then read about the topic before finally, writing about it.  

Phonics

I have begun with phonics because it plays a major role in English. It is the primary method used to teach children how to read. It also plays a key role in learning how to spell. Phonics involves teaching children which letter combinations make each sound. For example: 'ea;' 'e'; 'ee' and 'y' are four different, letter combinations that make the 'ee' sound.

WhiIe most children will become free readers (children who are no longer reading books from a phonics scheme) by around eight years old, I have not come across a school at which some children are not still learning their phonics in Year 6. 


Vowels

Make sure that the learner knows all of the vowels. They are a; e; i; o; u. Sometimes y acts like a vowel.

Try learning the mnemonic: Aelephant iorange underpants. The first letter of each word begins with a vowel.

 

Consonants

All the letters which are not vowels are consonants.

Digraphs and trigraphs

A two-letter combination that makes one sound when read aloud is called a digraph. Examples include: 'aw' and 'or'.

A three-letter combination that makes on sound is called a trigraph. Examples include: 'igh' and 'ing.'

A split digraph is a letter combination that is made up of two letters that have a letter between them. For example in 'grape' the 'a' and the 'e' form a split digraph because the fact that there is just one syllable between the letters means that the 'a' has a long sound. A second example is rope. The o and e form a split digraph. Because there is just one consonant between  'o' and the 'e', the 'o' has a long sound.

The order in which phonics are learnt

The following lists are the sets of sounds which are taught using the excellent: Read Write Inc. system. There are other good providers such as Jolly Phonics. The Mr Thorne series on Youtube is also worth investigating.


Read Write Inc. Speed Sounds

Set 1 (The beginning)

m, a, s, d, t

I, n, p, g, o

c, k, u, b, f

e, l, h, sh, r

j, v, y, w, th

z, ch, qu, x, ng

 

Set 2

ay (as in: May I play?)

ee (as in: What do you see?)

igh (as in: Fly high)

ow (as in: Blow the snow)

oo (as in: Poo at the zoo)

….

oo (as in: Look at a book)

ar (as in: Start the car)

or (as in: Shut the door)

air (as in: That’s not fair)

ir (as in: Whirl and twirl)

 

Set 3

ea (as in: Cup of tea)

oi (as in: Spoil the boy)

a-e (as in: Make a cake)

i-e (as in: Nice smile)

o-e (as in: Phone home)

u-e (as in Huge brute)

aw (as in: Yawn at dawn)

are (as in: Care and share)

ur (as in: Nurse with a purse)

er (as in: Better letter)

ow (as in: Brown cow)

as (as in Snail in the rain)

oa (as in: Goat in a boat)

ew (as in: Chew the stew)

ire (as in: Fire, fire)


Letters and Sounds - Phase 5

https://www.cherrygardenprimary.co.uk/learning-zone/english/phonics/phase-5

a-e as in came

au as in Paul

aw as in saw

ay as in day

ee as in these 

ea as in sea

ew as in stew

ew as in chew

ey as in money

i-e as in like

ir as in girl

o-e as in bone

oe as in toe

ou as in out

oy as in boy

ph as in phone

u-e as in June

u-e as in huge

ue as in clue

u-e as in due

wh as in when


Jolly Phonics

Jolly Phonics is a phonics programme that teaches the order in a different order to Read Write Inc. It links song,s music and movement to the sounds. It's very good.

http://jollylearning.co.uk/overview-about-jolly-phonics/

Set 1: s; a; t; i; p; n

Set 2: ck; e; h; r; m; d

Set 3: g; o; u; l; f; b

Set 4: a; j; oa; ie; ee; or

Set 5: z; w; ng; v; oo (as in book); oo (as  in zoo)

Set 6: y; x; ch; sh; th; th

Set 7: qu; ou; oi; ue; er; ar


The actions are written between the brackets. THIS SECTION IS NOT YET COMPLETE. I WILL COMPLETE IT A.S.A.P.)

a = ants on my arm (Waggle your fingers above your elbow as though ants are crawling on you while saying a, a, a)

b = Bring your bat (Pretend to hit a ball with a bat and say b, b, b, b)

c = Weare clicking castanets (Raise your hands and snap your fingers as though you are playing castanets and say ck; ck; ck; ck)

d = see my play on my drum (Beat your hands up and down as though you are playing a drum and say d, d, d, d)

e = eggs in the pan (Pretend to crack an egg against the side of a pan with one hand. Use both hands to open the shell. Say eh,eh, eh, eh)

f = my friends and I went to the beach with my floating fish (Let your hands come together gently as though an inflatable fish is deflating and say "Ffff"

g = the water gurgles down the drain (Spiral your hand down as though water is gurgling down a drain and say "G g, g, g"

h = I like to hop, hop, hop (Hold a hand to your mouth as if you are panting and say "H, h, h, h)

i = Ink the mouse is my pet (Pretend to be a mouse by wiggling your fingers at the end of your nose and squeak i, i, i)"

j = Pretend to wobble jelly on a plate while saying "J, j, j, j"






Short and Long sounds

Every letter of the alphabet has both a short sound and a long sound. The differences are highlighted in the examples below:

short a = hat; maths

long a = ate; flavour

short e = met; bench

long e = me; she

short i = slip; drink

Short o = hot; lost

Long o = over; hotel

short u = under; run

long u = united; U.F.O.  

Vowels

Hopefully your child will know what these are by now, but unfortunately, many will not. The vowels are: a, e, i, o and u. Sometimes y acts as a vowel.

Check that your child knows how to pronounce both the letter names and the letter sounds.


Reading

The National Literacy Trust is a charity with some great suggestions for reading with children. Doing so is an amazing way to ignite and prolong their interest in reading. Children are never too old to enjoy being read to by an adult. Some oft their suggestions and some of my own are below:

1) Bring the story to life by using different voices for the characters.Try out a soft, gentle tone for the BFG or a young and happy voice for another character.

2) Stop at exciting points and ask your children what they think will happen next.

3) Let your child choose what they want to read. It doesn't have to be books. Newspapers, comics, e-books, etc. all count.


Punctuation

Capital letters.

Every sentence that begins with a letter must begin with a capital letter.

Names of specific people or animals begins with a capital letter. Remember that both the first name and the surname begin with a capital letter. If the text is about a person or an animal, but not a specific animal, it begins with a lower case letter.

Names of specific places begin with a capital letter. For example, the names of towns, counties, cities, countries, continents, seas and oceans begin with a capital letter. Each word in a school must begin with a capital letter.

The days of the week all begin with a capital letter.

The months of the year all begin with a capital letter.

Names of religious festivals and events begin with a capital letter. For example: Christmas, Eid, Ramadan and Yom Kippur. 

Names of specific periods of time begin with a capital letter. For example: Victorian, Ancient Egypt, Elizabethan.

Full stops

Every sentence must end in either a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark.

Commas

Commas can change the meaning of words

Take a short breath whenever you see a comma.

  • The old lady collected all sorts of things: silver, paper, hats, clocks and tablecloths.
  • The old lady collected all sorts of things: silver paper, hats, clocks and tablecloths.
  • The old lady collected all sorts of things: silver, paper hats, clocks and tablecloths.

Commas are used to break up longer sentences into smaller parts to make more sense.
When he saw the pirate ship on the horizon, the captain gave the alarm.
She called as loudly as she could, but no-one could hear her.

Commas are used to separate any extra information that is added.
The words enclosed by the commas could be left out without changing the general meaning of the sentence.

Commas in lists.

A comma can be used to separate items in a list. However, they are not used for the last item on a list when you use and.

Speech marks. These are properly called inverted commas.

Inverted commas look like this: " "

Whenever a person is speaking, their words should be written inside inverted commas. All punctuation should be written inside the inverted commas. Commas often follow speech. When this happens, the comma must be put inside the inverted commas. 

Apostrophes

Apostrophes look like this: '

Apostrophes can be used to show:

  • who owns what (possession.) For example: This is Ann's car. (The cat is owned by Ann.)
  • letters that are missing in a word or words. I shan't do it. (Shall not has been abbreviated (shortened.) Other examples include: won't, can't, haven't, wouldn't, couldn't. Words are not contracted when  formally speaking or writing.

Colon

A colon looks like this :

Colons are often used to introduce information.

http://www.wikihow.com/Sample/Colon-Usage

Ellipsis

An ellipsis looks like this: …
An ellipsis is often used to create a feeling of tension or concern (worry) in the reader so they want to know what happens next.

Spelling

Focus on learning high frequency words. These are words that you should expect to write a lot. For example:

  • Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday, Sunday
  • January, February, March, April, May, June, July August, September, October, November, December
  • The 5 Ws and an H: Who, what, when, where, why, how
  • Because
  • Fire
  • Dear
  • Sincerely
  • Conclusion

There are lists of words that your child can spell listed in the National Curriculum in the section on English. I recommend ignoring what year group it says it is for and working through the spellings in order. Note that just because your child has spelt a word correctly once or twice, this does not mean that they will necessarily remember how to spell it later on. Those who read more, generally spell better than those who read less.

Personally, I am not a fan of children being given lists of 10 or more new spellings to learn each week. This is because if the child got a spelling wrong, and then they are given new spellings, they have not learnt the first set of spellings. I prefer for each child to have a list of up to eight spellings (certainly no more) to learn. When the child has spelt the word three separate times, it is removed from the list and a new word replaces it. While the number of spellings that the child will encounter will be smaller, they are more likely to remember the correct spelling for the long-term.

Look for patterns in words to help you spell

Educators talk of letters having both names and sounds. This is perhaps best explained by way of examples:

The letter sound of a is pronounced ah, as in cat. However, the letter name of a is pronounced ay as in mate.

The letter sound of h is pronounced h, as in the sound made when your first start to breath out when panting. Take note: It is not her! However, the letter name of h, is pronounced aych, as in Rachel.

If c is followed by an e, ce is pronounced: as s. Example include: ice, certain and vice.

If c is followed by an i, ci is pronounced: as s. Examples include: circle

If c is followed by a y, cy is pronounced: sy. Examples include: cycle and  bicycle 

If 'g' is followed by an i, gi is pronounced: j. Examples include: giant, ginormous.

If 'g' is followed by an e, ge is pronounced: j. Examples include: gentle and generous.

If g is followed by a y, gy is pronounced: jy. Examples include: energy and sociology.

Site/CAMRA words and spelling

There are many words that do not seem to fit spelling patterns or rules. Unfortunately, the most common way of remembering these is by repeatedly seeing them and writing them. These include: the, who, what and why.

Please visit Spelling for more information on this topic.


How children are assessed

In Primary schools, two very widely used types of assessment tools are the National Curriculum and the I.T.A.F.s. I.T.A.F. is short for Interim Targeted Assessment Framework. There is a Year2 version and a Year 6 version. The I.T.A.F. is largely based on the National Curriculum. These checklists are used by teachers to give the children a level and to assess progress. They also inform teachers about what their future teaching should focus on. Teachers assess various pieces of work against the criteria. Typically at least three separate pieces of work will be needed for the teacher to say that a particular criterion has been achieved.

 

The Year 2 English Writing Exemplification Overview for working at the expected standard is below:

The pupil can, after discussion with the teacher:

Write simple, coherent narratives about personal experiences and those of others (real or fictional).

Write about real events, recording these simply and clearly.

Demarcate most sentences in their writing with capital letters and full stops and use question marks correctly when required.

Use the present tense and the past tense mostly correctly and consistently.

Use co-ordination (e.g. and/but/or) and some subordination (e.g. when/if/that/because) to join clauses.

Segment spoken words into phonemes and representing these by using graphemes. They must spell many words correctly and make phonetically plausible attempts at others. (For example, if a child writes ‘fone’ instead of phone, the spelling is considered plausible because both ‘f’ and ‘ph produces the same sound.

They must spell many common exception words. See the Spellings section of this website to see the list.

Form capital letters and digits of the correct size, orientation (way around) and relationship to one another and to lower-case.

Use spaces between words that reflect the size of the letters.

 

The Year 2 English Writing Exemplification Overview for working at greater depth is below:

 

The pupil can, after discussion with a teacher:

Write effectively and coherently for different purposes, drawing on their reading to inform the vocabulary and grammar in their writing.

 

Make simple additions, revisions and proof-reading corrections to their own writing.

 

Use the punctuation taught at Key Stage 1 mostly correctly.

 

Spell most common exception words. See the Spellings section of this website.

 

Add suffixes to spell most words correctly in their writing. Examples of suffixes the children should be able to apply include ‘ment’, ‘ness’, ‘full, ‘less’ and ‘ly’.

 

Use the diagonal and horizontal strokes to join letters.


Sentences (Simple; Compound; Complex)

  • A simple sentence includes only one subject (noun) and one verb.
  • A compound sentence include a main clause, a conjuction and a main clause.
  • A complex sentence includes a main clause that is joined to a subordinate clause with a conjunction. 

Poetry

Reasons why poetry is brilliant

Since poems do not include many words, the writer has to make sure that every word is well chosen. All low quality and mediocre words must be removed. Poetry writing strongly encourages writers to challenge themselves to find the words that are the very best at describing the subject they are writing about. Use a thesaurus when writing poetry and while spelling is important, content is even more important so be adventurous with your word choices.


Your child should be able to identify different types of poem including: free verse, acrostic, shape, haiku, narrative and nonsense.


Types of Poem

I have detailed notes on just some of the many different types of poem.

Remember: Most poems do not rhyme.

Haiku: These are just three lines long. The first line has five syllables, the second line has seven syllables and the the third line has five syllables. Think: 5-7-5

Tanka: These are five lines long. The first line has five syllables, the second line has seven syllables, the third line has five syllables and both the fourth and fifth lines have seven syllables in each.  Think: 5-7-5-7-7.

Cinquain: These are five lines long. These have two syllables in the first line, four syllables in the second line, six syllables in the third line, eight syllables in the fourth line and two syllables in the fifth line. Think: 2-4-6-8-2. 

Shape Poems: These are written in the same shape as the the noun they are describing. For example, a shape poem about a butterfly would have the words appear as though they were traced around the outside of a butterfly.

Nonsense Poems: These use words which are made up. The writer chose the words for the reader to imagine what they might mean. The Jabberworky, by Lewis Carroll, is a famous nonsense poem.

Acrostic Poems


Steps to writing an acrostic poem:
1) Choose a topic;
2) Write your topic vertically (in a column) with the first letter and the last letter at the bottom.
3) Jot down words related words to the topic that begin with letters contained in the name of your chosen topic. This is a thought shower process from which you will choose the most suitable words.
4) Write the words from Step 3 to begin the line of each part of the acrostic;
5) Complete the rest of the line to create a poem. Remember that it does not have to rhyme.

Analysing poems and improving the quality of writing

Figurative Language

Figurative language are words and phrases used to describe things. It includes similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia and personification. These are explained below.

TRAPSAMORR is a very useful acronym for learning what to look out for in a poem. It also makes for a good list of things to try to include in a piece of extended writing.

T = Title and Topic. Does if give a clue about what the text is about. T could also stand for 'title.'

R = Rhyme. Does the poem rhyme?

A = Alliteration. Do several words in the same sentence begin with the same initial (starting) sound? Alliteration has nothing to do with the initial letter.

P = Personification. Personification is used to describe something by using body parts or feelings that humans have. Examples: 
The face of the clock glowed. (A clock does not actually have a face in the same way that people have faces.) 
The flames licked the walls of the farmhouse. Flames do not actually lick – but it might seem like they do.

S = Similes. Are the phrases 'as a' or 'like a' included to help to describe things.

A = Adjectives. Has a range of adjectives been included. Adjectives can describe the colour, quantity, age, texture, temperature or emotions (feelings).

M = Metaphors. A metaphor is a way of a describing something by giving it a quality or feature that it does have in real life. They involve the writer saying something as though it is a fact, when the author knows it to be untrue. Metaphors are used to exaggerate. Example: 'He's a machine.' Machines are known to never get tired so the writer wrote he's a machine to show that the male he was talking about never gets tired. A vast number of metaphors are used to describe sport. Imagine this football match: "Have you seem David; he's a monster in the area; smashed the ball so hard he tore the net in half. That wizard is on fire." The essence of the speech is: David does not get tired and makes very few errors. He hit the ball extremely hard score. He is so good that it seems like he has special powers over the ball. David's been doing consistently well.

O = Onomatopoeia. Onomatopoeia is words that sound like the objects they name. Examples include: buzz, chop, ding, bang and hum.

http://www.educationquizzes.com/ks2/english/onomatopoeia/ 

R = Rhythm. Should the rhythm be read  in a special way that highlights the rhythm.

R = Repetition. Does the poem repeat particular words or phrases? If so, how?

Letter Writing

Structure and Layout of Letters:

Your address must be written in the top-right corner of the page.

Write the date under your address.

Write the address one line below where you wrote the date, but this address is written on the left-hand side of the page.

Leave a line after your address and write: Dear Mr/Mrs INSERT NAME. If you do not know the person's name, instead use their title: e.g. 'Dear Sir,'/'Dear Madam,'/'Dear Mayor,'

Leave a one line gap between where you wrote 'Dear' and your first paragraph. Your first paragraph should be a brief introduction. It should summarise why you are writing. Writing: 'I am writing to say' has no value so do not do it.

Have a new paragraph for each topic. The last paragraph should begin with a word or words such as 'In conclusion' or In summary.' Depending on the type of letter, you may then want to write something like 'I look forward to hearing from you.' This is a typical ending of a persuasive letter.

Write: Yours sincerely, - then put your name under Yours sincerely.

Note: Use: 'Yours sincerely,' if you used the name of the person to whom you are writing,. If you wrote the title of the person e.g. 'Dear Sir,' write: 'Yours faithfully,' instead of 'Yours sincerely,'.

Rhetorical Questions

These are often included in persuasive writing because they have high impact. They are questions where the reader or listener is not expected to respond because the answer is supposed to be obvious. For example: 'How would you feel if your front garden was covered in dangerous, smelly litter?' or 'How would you have felt if you were learning to swim and the only pool near you was replaced by flats?' 

Descriptive Writing

Choice of adjectives (describing words) can be the difference between high quality descriptive writing and mediocre descriptions. Try to use a range of adjectives. It is useful to remember the name of each category (group) of adjectives. Some of these are shown below:

 colourCrimson; sapphire; emerald; snow ; pitch black
 ageinfant; toddler; juvenile; elderly 
 sizeminiscule; colossal; enormous 
 amountfive; twenty-three 
 shapecuboid; circular; triangular 
 texture soft; rough; smooth; jagged
 emotions/feelingsgorgeous; putrid; foul; scary; powerful; brave 
 temperaturelukewarm; boiling; chilly; freezing 


Tips:

Include similes, metaphors and personification.

Write high quality opening sentences. Interesting openers can include an adverb; speech; a question mark; an exclamation mark;  'If'

Include a range of conjunctions

Try to include a variety of adverbs. 'Suddenly' is okay but it is over-used. 

Script Writing

The key parts to a good script are to have a strong beginning, middle and end.

The beginning: This is where the scene is described, the atmosphere described and the characters are introduced.

The middle: This is the longest section. It should describe what happens to the characters in their journey. It should describe their emotions.

Challenge assumptions e.g. make the reader think they know something about a character or place, but then there is a twist, or several twists, that change everything. Aim to send the reader on an emotional journey. Make the reader care about the characters and want at least one of them to succeed.

This section should build up to a major problem that needs to be overcome.

Give the reader a reason to care. Explain what terrible event will happen if the characters do not succeed.

The end

Hopefully one or more of your characters overcome the major problem at the last minute. Continue to describe emotions and remind the reader what is at stake and what happened as a result of the successful actions by the characters.

The Layout of Scripts

Speech and dialogue is not written in inverted in commas. Instead, the name of the character is written, followed by a colon. Then the words are written.

Stage directions i.e. things that happen but are not read aloud, are written between a pair of brackets.

Features of Scripts

You may wish to have a narrator. The characters will not be able to communicate in any with the reader. The narrator helps to tell the story, explaining things that the characters cannot.

Book Review

It is a useful to get into the habit of reviewing texts read. Questions that might be asked include:

  1. What age group would you recommend this for?
  2. What did you like about the text?
  3. What did you dislike about the text?
  4. Who was your favourite character and why?
  5. How could the story be improved?
  6. What genre was the text?
  7. Which character would you least like to be your friend? Why?
  8. Which events in the book stand out in your mind. Why? How did they make you feel?

Recounts

Recounts are often written in the first person. This means that they will often include the word: 'I.'

Recounts include lots of 'time words'. Time words include: before; after; next; then; the following day/week/year/season.

Newspaper Articles

Features of newspaper articles

They are written in the past tense

The main title is called the 'headline.' These should have few words and have high impact so they cause the reader to want to read the article.

The first paragraph includes key facts. Questions that start with 'who;' 'what;' 'when;' and 'where;' should all be answered in the opening paragraph.

The 'byline' gives the date and author.

A photo is often accompanied by a caption. A caption is a short phrase or paragraph explaining what is shown in the photo.

Newspaper articles use the 'inverted pyramid.' This means that the most important information is at the beginning of the paragraph.

The text is written in columns. 

http://www.firstnews.co.uk/teachers/sites/default/files/Newspaper%20Report%20Features.pdf


Persuasive Writing

Rhetorical questions are often included in persuasive writing. These are questions that do not need to be answered because the answer is obvious from simple deduction.


The first paragraph must clearly and briefly explain what the problem is and what you expect to happen.


It is useful to write a paragraph about getting compensated. For example: I would like a free voucher to Super Theme Park (if that is where the problem happened.)


You may want to say that the poor service is not what you have come to expect from the organisation.

The final paragraph must summarise what the problem is and what you want to happen. 

Imperative Verbs (Sometimes called 'Bossy Verbs' 

Imperative verbs are used in commands. For example: 'You must;'  'you have to;' 'It is imperative that you.' All these words are much stronger than 'You should...' They appear in sets of instructions e.g. stir the mixture; light the fire; eat your dinner. 

Presenting

Presentations should be carefully planned.

Before presenting, ensure you know how long your presentation must be. Make sure your presentation is of an acceptable length. Note that people tend to speak faster when presenting than when they are practising.

Think carefully about your audience. Choose material (content) that will interest them and that is not obvious to them, nor too tricky for them to understand without much difficulty.

Keep the number of topics to a minimum. Aim for depth over covering a lot of issues.

Focus on producing high quality content. No technology or other parts of 'the show' can cover up poor content.

You don't have to use Powerpoint! You don't have to use Prezi (although because you can do more with it, Prezi can produce a higher quality presentation than Powerpoint.) In fact, you don't have to use a computer at all! Many of the very best presentations do not involve using ay technology. Having said this, if you do have slides, keep them to a minimum. Most slides should have fewer than 10 words on them. They should be prompts. The focus should be on the speaker.

Have a plan if the technology does not work. You may want to print out copies of slides just in case something goes wrong.  

Practice your presentation before you present.

When Presenting

Introduce yourself and clearly state the topic of your presentation.

When showing a prop, make sure that everyone can see them. Hold them up for at least five seconds so that everyone has chance to see it. Remember that a presentation does not need props to be good. Keep them to a minimum. Again, the focus on the person speaking, not what they have brought with them.

Like other work, your presentation should have an introduction which states the topics that will be covered, a main body of two or three issues (for a 15 minute presentation) and a summary/conclusion. At the end of your presentation, thank the audience for listening and ask if anyone has any questions.


Paragraphs

Paragraphs help to structure a story

When to start a new paragraph

Start a new paragraph when there is a change of:

  • subject
  • location
  • person described
  • speaker
  • time frame
  • I like to remember when to start a new paragraph by saying 'Three S' and a T.' This stands for Subject, Speaker, Setting and Time Frame. 

The Dewey Decimal System

Go to a library and practise finding books using the Dewey Decimal System.

How to Structure a Simple Story

  • Set the scene. Describe the setting and introduce the characters. Describe in detail.
  • Build up the story
  • Introduce a problem
  • Resolution - show how the problem will be resolved (if it will be.) Remember that even if the problem might start to be resolved, something can still go wrong. 
  • Conclude the story or leave it as a cliff-hanger.

You may want to separate a story into five pragraphs: 1) Opening - including setting the scene and introducing the characters; 2) Build up; 3) Dilemma/action; 4) Resolution; 5) Ending

How to Improve the Quality of Writing

Roald Dahl said that a writer needs to be the following:

  • a perfectionist
  • self disciplined
  • have stamina
  • a person who writes well
  • a person with a good imagination

What is said below, could easily be modified to improve the quality of speeches and presentations. I have covered just a few ways that the quality of writing might be improved.

Plan

It is very important to plan what is going to be written about. This might begin with a thought shower (brainstorm) during which a large number of ideas are noted down on paper. From these, one might choose a few topics to develop. With a  fresh piece of paper and plenty of space between the chosen ideas, write them down. Then, around the topics, write some ideas connected to them. This is called 'Mind-Mapping.' Mind maps are excellent tools for organising your thoughts and giving you structure.

Draft

At the earliest opportunity, children should get into the habit of recognising that their first attempt at doing something, should not be their only attempt because it can be improved upon. Encourage the child to look for ways to enhance their writing. For example, could 'better' words be chosen? Could a wider range of adjectives and adverbs be included? Have paragraph breaks been included? Celebrate any improvement that the child makes to their previous attempts. If the child creates more than one draft, have the child compare their final version with the first attempt and ask which is better and why?

Vary the Length of Your Sentences

It can vey effective to change from having a longer sentence to a very short one. Remember that sentences that are three or fewer words long often end in an exclamation mark.

Starting a Story

Start a story with an interesting opening sentence that intrigues the reader, but to score high marks for correct use of punctuation and other features of writing. If the writer begins a story with a short speech, they have the ability to demonstrate correct use of speech marks, commas and exclamation marks, all within one sentence.

VCOP and CPOW

A lot of teachers use the acronyms VCOP and CPOW to children to think about what their text should include.

V = Vocabulary (Has the best possible word been chosen?)

C = Conjunctions  (Conjunctions are words and phrases that join sentences together. Examples include: However, next, the following day.) The teacher is looking for a range of conjunctions to be used.

O = Opening sentences. (The teach wants to know if the text begins with an interesting or exciting opening sentence.)

P = Punctuation. (Has the child demonstrated that they can correctly use a variety of examples of punctuation?)

The letters in CPOW stand for Conjunctions, Punctuation, Opening Sentences and Wow Words. Wow Words are well chosen, descriptive verbs, adverbs and adjectives.

Explanations

It is important to describe what happened, but also to give reasons as to why something happened. Explanations focus on 'why' and 'how.'

Words and phrases that are often included in explanations include: because; therefore; since; ergo; as a result; for this reason; it has been scientifically proven; experts agree that; it is a well known fact that

Explanations may include a rhetorical question.

Terminology

Adjective An adjective is a describing word. Adjectives describe nouns. Adjective categories: groups include: shape, size, texture, emotion (feeling/opinion), age and number.  Many adjectives have the suffix (end in) 'ous'. For example: horrendous; stupendous; courageous; outrageous

Adverb

An adverb is word that describes a verb, another adverb or another adjective. It adds more information. For example: I spoke quickly. Spoke is the verb. Quickly is the adverb because it describes how I spoke. While many 'how' adverbs end have the suffix (end in) ‘ly,’ not all of them do. For example: 'often', 'perhaps' and 'fast' are all adverbs.

Collective Nouns

A collective noun is the proper word for groups of various nouns. For example: 'Goose' is the noun and a 'group' of geese is properly called a flock of geese. You can have a pride of lions, a prickle of hedgehogs, a murder of crows and a school of fish.

A group of organisations can also be a collective noun. For example: the BBC or family or the Government.

Compare and Contrast

If asked to compare and contrast two texts, it means to say what they have in common (compare) and what is different (contrast.)

Conjunctions

Coordinating conjunctions

A way of remembering coordinating conjunctions is to remember as 'Fanboys.' To see why, look at the first letter of each of these examples:  for; and; nor; but; or; yet; so  

Subordinating conjunctions

Subordinating conjunctions include: as; though; who; when; unless; until; while; despite; therefore and furthermore. 

The First Person , Second Person and the Third Person

When a person writes in the first person, they tend to use words such as I, we, my and our. They are writing from the author's viewpoint.

The second person involves the writer addressing (writing or speaking to inform) the reader/listener. For example: 'You should include more adjectives.' The words: you and your often appear when writing or speaking in the second person. 

The Third Person is the most common form of writing. It used in academic writing and in many novels. Common words found in Third Person writing include: him; her; he; she; it; their and they.

Infer and deduce

To infer or deduce means to work out from clues as to what is happening, what has happened or what will happen. For example:

Sweat poured down James' face. He found himself day-dreaming of icy water. His legs ached but he stumbled onwards.

In the above description, I did not write that the sun was shining, it was extremely hot outside and that James had been in that environment for a very long time. However, the clues strongly hit that this is true.

Metaphor

A metaphor is a way of a describing something by giving it a quality or feature that it does have in real life. For example: He’s a monster. The man was not actually a monster but had some of the qualities of a monster e.g. he was very large, scary and terribly behaved.

Noun

Common nouns are the names of things, for example, people, animals, plants, places and objects. Most nouns are things that can be touched.

Prefix

A prefix is the combination of letters that come before a root word. Prefixes lengthen root words. Examples include: 'bi.' 'bi' comes before bicycle. 'Bi' means two. 'Un' comes before happy in the word unhappy. 'Un' means 'not.'

Preposition

A preposition is a word or group of words that combine with a noun or pronoun to form a phrase. Prepositions include: in, on, under, over, next to, between, beside and with. Prepositions also include what are sometimes known as time words. They include 'at', 'in' and 'on.' 

Pronouns

A pronoun is a word that is in place of where a noun, such as a person's name, would be. Pronouns can show reference to a group of people. 

Common pronouns include: he; she; I; him; her; we, you; we;  them; I; our; they; us

Relative Pronouns

Relative pronouns include: what; who; that; where; whom; when

Reported Speech
Reported speech is used to show what other people believe, think or say. Examples include: Ray say said he loves swimming.
Tina likes him.

Root Word

A root word is a word, or part of a word that does not have letters added to it. In other words, a root word is how the word starts off as. It does not have a prefix or suffix added to it. For example: Interview contains view. 'Viewing' contains view. 'Views' contains view. In all of the given examples, 'view' is the root word.

Simile

A simile is a way of describing things by comparing two or more things. They include the words ‘as’ or ‘like’. Examples include: The cat’s coat was as dark as charcoal. He was as cunning as a fox. Like a cheetah she ran through the field. She had spent so long in the sun she looked like a red tomato.

Suffix

A suffix is the group of letters that come at the end of a word. For example: running. The ‘ing’ is the suffix. It tells us that the word is a verb.

Verb

A verb is a doing or action word. They can often have the suffix (word ending) ‘ed’ or ‘ing’. To help me remember, I often start a sentence: Can I: INSERT WORD. If it is possible, it is a verb. E.g. Can I hop? Yes (It is a verb). Other example include: fly; skip; boil; roast; simmer. Most verbs that are written in the past tense have the suffix (end in) 'ed.' For example: hopped; skipped; jumped; climbed.

Modal Verbs
Examples of modal verbs include: can, should, will, want. may, might and must 

You must combine them with another verb to show what you can/should/want to do. For example:
1.I can speak French.
2.My brother should walk faster.
3.We shall play football.

Auxiliary Verbs

The function of an auxiliary verb is to help. Sometimes it is a called a 'helper verb' or a 'helping verb.' Not all sentences contain auxiliary verbs. If a sentence contains an auxiliary verb, it appears before the verb.

Auxiliary verbs include:

versions of 'has' which include: 'had', 'has' and 'have'

versions of 'do' which include 'do' 'does' and 'did'

am, is, are, was, were

Tenses

Children need to learn how to use the past tense, the present tense and the future tense correctly. They must speak in the correct tense and write in the correct tense.

Examples:

 PastPresent Future 
I playedI am playing I will play 
I baked I am baking I will bake 
 I hadI have I will have 
 I wroteI am writing I will write 
 I flewI am flying I will fly 
 I sawI see I will see 
 I broughtI have  I will bring 
 The thief stoleThe thief is stealing  The thief will steal 
 I caughtI am catching I will catch 

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Basic Editing Checklist

Grammar

  • Have I stayed in the same tense throughout my story, or changed tenses if the story changes to the past or future? 
  • Do the singular and plural verbs agree? 
  • Do the sentences easily make sense?

Spelling

  • Have I used a dictionary to find the correct spelling? 
  • Did I use apostrophes correctly to show something belongs in place of missing letters in contracted words?

Punctuation

  • Have I used a capital letters at the beginning of sentences, names, names of places and at the beginning of each sentence? 
  • Have I put a full stop, exclamation mark r question mark at the end of every sentence? 
  • Have commas been used when short breaths are needed around clauses, in lists and before speech? 
  • Have I put inverted commas around the words spoken?

Contractions

Children must learn how to write contractions. Contractions are shortened versions of longer words or word combinations. They include apostrophes. The apostrophe is used to show that letters have been missed out. Contracted words are used in informal speech and writing. They must not be used in formal speech and writing. In formal speech and writing, write whole words.

Examples:

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Formal LanguageContracted Words
 should haveshould have 
 wasn'twas not 
 couldn'tcould not 
 hadn'thad not 
 they'vethey have 
 won'twill not 
 shan'tshall not 
 you'reyou are 
 they'rethey are 
 would'vewould have 

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Songs/rhymes to remember the meaning of verbs, adverbs and adjectives

Verbs
A verb is an action,
If it's an action that you do,
If you do it, it's a verb,
It's a verb that you do.

Nouns
I never knew a noun ,
Not a noun I didn't like,
They are people, places, things
Everything that I like.

Adjectives
Touch, taste,
See, smell, feel, hear,
To describe you need an adjective,
You better look here.

Adverbs
Ad-verbs often end in 'ly'
Add detail to a verb so go use them, go try!

Starting a new paragraph
We can't have you forgetting, 
If you make a change to setting.
If the speaker's not the same, then new paragraph's the game.
If you change to 'nother time,
Then new paragraph, new line.
If you make a change to topic,
Then new paragraph, get on it!

Sayings, idioms, phrases, proverbs and metaphors
Correctly applying idioms and proverbs can help to demonstrate a deep level of understanding of English. Many of them contain interesting metaphors. Idioms and proverbs often come up in comprehension papers so it is worth learning what they mean. Below are some examples with brief explanations:

  • Too many cooks spoils the broth. (Too many people working one job can lead to a poor result).
  • Many hands make light work. (If you have lots of helpers, a job can get completed quickly.)
  • More haste, less speed. Work quickly but thoughtfully because working very quickly but without taking care can cause you to make mistakes. These mistakes could slow down the worker.
  • The early bird gets the early worm. (People who start on a task early can benefit that later starters do not.)
  • It's raining cats and dogs. (It's raining heavily.)
  • Rome wasn't built in a day. (A big task takes a lot of time to complete.)
  • Two wrongs don't make a right. (Following one bad choice with another does not make the first choice a good one.)
  • The pen is mightier than the sword. (The message that a pen writes can have more effect than a single sword.)
  • The elephant in the room. (The elephant in the room is the obvious topic of conversation.)
  • A wolf in sheep's clothing. (The wolf is a bad person who is pretending to not be a bad person.)
  • When in Rome, do as the Romans do. (When visiting a foreign (or different place), do what the local people do. This will help you to fit in.)
  • It's not always black and white. (It's not always simply all good or all bad. Often there are good and bad points.)
  • The penny dropped. (They suddenly understood.)
  • How long is a piece of string? This is used when the amount of something is unknown.

Ideas for a character profile
If you know your characters in great depth, it makes it much easier to write about them because you know how they will react in a wide variety of scenarios. Below are some questions that you can ask yourself to help you to write one:

What do their clothes look like? 
What special clothes, equipment or markings do they have? E.g. a dufflecoat; a sonic screwdriver; scars or tattoos; unsual eyes.
How do they typically move? E.g. stride; creep; dash
Where are they from?
What are their hobbies?
What makes them laugh?
What makes them cry?
What is their secret?
How confident are they?
How do they react under pressure?
What's their major flaw e.g. what is their major weakness?
What are their goals?


Settings
Think carefully about the season that your story is set in. For example, the daylight hours are likely to be much shorter in winter than in summer. Cold is more likely to be a problem than in the summer.